Comments for Farouk's 8th grade evolution http://farouk.learnerblogs.org I see said the blind man to the deaf man at the corner of the round table Thu, 08 Jan 2009 05:58:16 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=wordpress-mu-1.2.5 Comment on Aztecs notes for project by On This Day In History http://farouk.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/11/aztecs-notes-for-project/#comment-19 On This Day In History Thu, 13 Sep 2007 13:18:53 +0000 http://farouk.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/11/aztecs-notes-for-project/#comment-19 <strong>On This Day In History...</strong> I couldn't understand some parts of this article, but it sounds interesting... On This Day In History…

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]]> Comment on Teen Life Introduction by Malaysia Today and Beyond » Blog Archive » Teen Life Introduction http://farouk.learnerblogs.org/2007/01/28/teen-life-introduction/#comment-12 Malaysia Today and Beyond » Blog Archive » Teen Life Introduction Mon, 05 Feb 2007 05:31:32 +0000 http://farouk.learnerblogs.org/2007/01/28/teen-life-introduction/#comment-12 [...] Original post by Farouk’s 8th grade evolution and software by Elliott Back Share and Enjoy:These icons link to social bookmarking sites where readers can share and discover new web pages. [...] […] Original post by Farouk’s 8th grade evolution and software by Elliott Back Share and Enjoy:These icons link to social bookmarking sites where readers can share and discover new web pages. […]

]]> Comment on Honest Opinions by Daniel http://farouk.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/15/honest-opinions/#comment-11 Daniel Mon, 22 Jan 2007 13:33:28 +0000 http://farouk.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/15/honest-opinions/#comment-11 Hi, I, m Daniel from Cartagena, Colombia, and I am doing the TLP like you. Here in Colombia we have similar problems of war. In here there are several groups such as FARC (Colombian Revolutionary Armed Forces) that attack in many places and kill many people because they want the government to change. Another big problem that you may know about Colombia, is drugs. Many wars are caused because of it and every day they catch someone selling drugs. In your native country do you have similar problems like the ones in Colombia? Hi, I, m Daniel from Cartagena, Colombia, and I am doing the TLP like you. Here in Colombia we have similar problems of war. In here there are several groups such as FARC (Colombian Revolutionary Armed Forces) that attack in many places and kill many people because they want the government to change. Another big problem that you may know about Colombia, is drugs. Many wars are caused because of it and every day they catch someone selling drugs. In your native country do you have similar problems like the ones in Colombia?

]]> Comment on Aztecs notes for project by Ms. Seang http://farouk.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/11/aztecs-notes-for-project/#comment-10 Ms. Seang Tue, 12 Dec 2006 07:17:58 +0000 http://farouk.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/11/aztecs-notes-for-project/#comment-10 Hi Farouk. You spent your time well. Here are some things to consider: What are other pros of being located on a lake? What are the general characteristics of theie gods and how did their beliefs control their daily lives? You had a great explanation of the initial perception of the Spanish and Aztecs about one another. You might want to consider why and how it changed? Clearly define "mestizo" and how that group affected modern Mexico? Good luck. Use the blogs of your classmates to help you. Hi Farouk. You spent your time well. Here are some things to consider: What are other pros of being located on a lake? What are the general characteristics of theie gods and how did their beliefs control their daily lives? You had a great explanation of the initial perception of the Spanish and Aztecs about one another. You might want to consider why and how it changed? Clearly define “mestizo” and how that group affected modern Mexico? Good luck. Use the blogs of your classmates to help you.

]]> Comment on GROW UP! by abhiram http://farouk.learnerblogs.org/2006/11/28/grow-up/#comment-9 abhiram Tue, 05 Dec 2006 13:19:31 +0000 http://farouk.learnerblogs.org/2006/11/28/grow-up/#comment-9 Farouk what exactly are you trying to say here, are you trying to put down a 14 year old jewish girl in hiding during WW2 , when all the jews are being hunted down and persecuted? You started by yelling at anne directly and went on to this "Anne is from a rich family and Anne has always been regarded as a cheerful little girl of twelve. Her mother isn’t very close to her and so they had arguments about growing up. She realizes that her mother isn’t the pain, she is." i dont understand this i also dont get it, why try to be mean to some girl. shes writing in her diary, it was personal, she can do what she wants. Show some empathy, is this supposed to be like hate male. BUt i do agree in a sense she is a bit cribby so dont feel bad about writing this but next time dont come on so forcefully Farouk what exactly are you trying to say here, are you trying to put down a 14 year old jewish girl in hiding during WW2 , when all the jews are being hunted down and persecuted? You started by yelling at anne directly and went on to this “Anne is from a rich family and Anne has always been regarded as a cheerful little girl of twelve. Her mother isn’t very close to her and so they had arguments about growing up. She realizes that her mother isn’t the pain, she is.” i dont understand this i also dont get it, why try to be mean to some girl. shes writing in her diary, it was personal, she can do what she wants. Show some empathy, is this supposed to be like hate male. BUt i do agree in a sense she is a bit cribby so dont feel bad about writing this but next time dont come on so forcefully

]]> Comment on GROW UP! by catrina http://farouk.learnerblogs.org/2006/11/28/grow-up/#comment-8 catrina Tue, 05 Dec 2006 09:30:07 +0000 http://farouk.learnerblogs.org/2006/11/28/grow-up/#comment-8 Farouk: i thought your word choice was descriptive, broad range of words and that your word choice energizes your writing ("mischievous") your sentence fluency was generally in control but lacked variety in length and structure (kind of repetitive) strong control of conventions, errors are few and minor "(you should know THAT now you’re older.)" good job p.s. i dont actually know if this is the "soul of a young girl" post. but i'll write this just in case. -catrina- Farouk:

i thought your word choice was descriptive, broad range of words and that your word choice energizes your writing (”mischievous”)

your sentence fluency was generally in control but lacked variety in length and structure (kind of repetitive)

strong control of conventions, errors are few and minor “(you should know THAT now you’re older.)”

good job
p.s. i dont actually know if this is the “soul of a young girl” post. but i’ll write this just in case.
-catrina-

]]> Comment on GROW UP! by sai8 http://farouk.learnerblogs.org/2006/11/28/grow-up/#comment-7 sai8 Fri, 01 Dec 2006 11:57:25 +0000 http://farouk.learnerblogs.org/2006/11/28/grow-up/#comment-7 Farouk, that was a very descriptive blog entry! It surprises me how you can't feel anger after an argument, as it is very hard for me to control my anger.I can tell that you've thought a lot about this blog, so awesome job! :) The only advice I can give you is that use a wider range of word choice to add flavor to your writing! Well done. Sai :] Farouk, that was a very descriptive blog entry! It surprises me how you can’t feel anger after an argument, as it is very hard for me to control my anger.I can tell that you’ve thought a lot about this blog, so awesome job! :) The only advice I can give you is that use a wider range of word choice to add flavor to your writing! Well done.

Sai :]

]]> Comment on GROW UP! by emmaro http://farouk.learnerblogs.org/2006/11/28/grow-up/#comment-6 emmaro Thu, 30 Nov 2006 09:03:03 +0000 http://farouk.learnerblogs.org/2006/11/28/grow-up/#comment-6 Hey Farouk, I read your Grow Up paragraph and I just think that you should have had a introduction, though you had a good conclusion. Here is what i thought about the 6 traits: Ideas and content: It was clear and focused but you could work on your details. Organization: The only htink you could do is have a introduction, in there put in your quote and what we have been doing and stuff. pretend like your reader does not know about anything that we have been doing! Voice: your voice matched your paper but you could show ome more emotions! Emma Hey Farouk,
I read your Grow Up paragraph and I just think that you should have had a introduction, though you had a good conclusion.

Here is what i thought about the 6 traits:
Ideas and content: It was clear and focused but you could work on your details.
Organization: The only htink you could do is have a introduction, in there put in your quote and what we have been doing and stuff. pretend like your reader does not know about anything that we have been doing!
Voice: your voice matched your paper but you could show ome more emotions!

Emma

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