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My English Final

June 8th, 2007 June 8th, 2007
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Before I properly begin my Essay I would like to say that I’m really nervous and my thoughts maybe scattered but here me out. My English year has been filled with many emotions and huge amounts of knowledge. Keeping the knowledge was a vital step. With my countless notes I revised again and again. This is the final test, an exam if I may, and what I’ve been taught will be put to the test.

My Thesis Is on the Tempest, My thesis states: the whole story and sequence of events is related to the beginning of time itself. It’s a challenging thesis about such a big topic being written down in a play, and now it’s being written down in one page.

I believe this is true and there is evidence that points this out. Scientifically the world and the whole universe was created by the big bang. A Huge cosmic explosion caused by the whole universe converging into a tiny dot, and then blasting into the whole world. Earth was first a piece of rock then meteors rain onto Earth. It size growing fast. There was no life at that time; it was hell on earth chaotic fumes of hot boiling gas filled the skies while thunder and rain poured onto the waters of earth. That last sentence is familiar to the storm in the begging of the play where there was a struggle for life. Getting away from scientific evidence. Religion plays a role here. The world was created by god and sent two humans. Adam and Eve, the first people and living organisms that time. The Garden of Eden represents the island that Prospero lives on. This none populated and Small Island is a peaceful one.

When the humans came to the Garden of Eden they were curios and knowledge less of what’s around them. It was only when Adam, influenced by the devil, picked the fruit of a tree that was to be forbidden to touch. It was then, that we humans obtained knowledge. This was also when the Garden became tainted by a sin that was lead by the devil, and curiosity. And more humans came and now we’re destroying the earth. Like In LOTF they too landed of the island by a crash. The crash hat scared the world. In the book there were two planed assassination One to be very serious and the other o be comedy, but both led to death. These plans were made by the ambition for supremacy. This attribute always leads to death. In Anne Frank, Hitler wanted to control the world and sculpted whatever he wanted. He was the cause of many genocides and death of almost all Jews in Europe.

In a perfect world everything is good but in our world there is an equal balance of good and evil. We see “good” as god and bad as in the devil. The god in the tempest was Prospero and the devil Caliban. Prospero has amazing magic and teaches a lesson to the people of earth, while Caliban, The devil influences an assassination on Prospero. Prospero uses Mercy while Caliban uses Revenge. The two hate each other and have no common ground. It sounds as if I am a stereotype, but seeing that some of this evidence is very debatable it’s hard not to be. Revenge a topic we know is bad and discuss as forbidden, but no matter how you look at it revenge is something that everybody does. It’s something that drives us to do suppository justice but rather into an unknowing path that will one day kill us all.

These paragraphs are filled with hardcore facts from science textbooks and from the bible itself. This book could be prophesying our future but this is a strong thesis with many of the facts in everyday life. It took me to be a Self-directed learner that is ad ESLR well achieved. The Supporting facts came from the time I spent researching many sites and knowing many religious facts from the Quorum. In the begging my time management had been an issue for me since day one. I had to interpret various forms of media and convert them into what I used today. This essay shows my growth in my writing skills and use of grammar that has always been below average. I also felt that I had improved my organization and following procedures properly. I conclude this essay with a good bye to you Mr. R and a thank you.